【2024年】

Writing 1

【2024新课标Ⅰ&II卷】假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：

（1）你完成的作品；

（2）你的感想。

注意：

（1）写作词数应为80个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Dear Chris,

I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.

_____________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Chris,

I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.

We were tasked to draw ｏｒ paint something that impressed us most. Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park’s pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.

The entire experience was incredibly refreshing. Being surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life. I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.

In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一封信, 分享在公园上美术课的经历。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

决定：decide→determine

整个的：entire→whole

提供：offer→provide

总之：in a word→in short

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by blooming flowers.

拓展句：Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, which was surrounded by blooming flowers.

【点睛】[高分句型1]We were tasked to draw ｏｒ paint something that impressed us most. (that引导的定语从句)

[高分句型2] I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.(as引导的时间状语从句)

Writing 2

【2024北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：

(1)建议投稿内容；

(2)就以上建议简要说明理由。

注意：(1)词数100左右；

(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

_____________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim,

It's great to hear you're planning to write about China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country. Here are a few suggestions for your article.

To begin with, talk about China's economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades. Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China's determination to build a shared future with the world. In addition, you can also mention China's role in helping solving global issues such as the global warming, offering a more comprehensive view.

Looking forward to reading your article!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写。外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中国成立75周年，他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，要求考生给他回复邮件，就此给予他建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

很好的：great →wonderful

成就：achievement→ accomplishment

建议：suggestion →advice

此外：In addition → what’s more

2.句式拓展

句式变换

原句：It's great to hear you're planning to write about China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.

拓展句：It's great to hear what you're planning to write about is China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversary of the founding of this country.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To begin with, talk about China's economic growth and technological advancements, which are the highlights in the past few decades.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases China's determination to build a shared future with the world.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）

【2023年】

Writing 1

【2023▪新高考I&II卷】

假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；

1. 说明问题；

2. 提出建议

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80个左右：

 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Ryan,

I'm Li Hua from Class 3.

__________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Ryan,

I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.

To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable ｏｒ less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with ｏｒ have difficulty communicating with.

My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities ｏｒ to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.

Thank you for considering my suggestion.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

首先：to begin with → first of all

提高：improve → progress

建议：suggestion → advice

选择：choose → ｓｅｌｅｃｔ

2句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities ｏｒ to let students choose their own partners.

拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities ｏｒ to let students choose their own partners.

Writing 2

【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：

(1)活动形式；

(2)活动内容。

注意：(1)词数100左右；

(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

_______________________

Yours，

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim

Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.

I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.

Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion→tip

提供：offer→provide

开展：carry out→conduct

主题：theme→topic

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.

拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.

【2022年】

Writing 1

【2022新高考I&II卷】

假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：

1. 节目介绍；

2. 访谈的时间和话题。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Caroline,

_________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear Caroline,

This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.

Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming.

I'd appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建立：establish→set up

了不起的：amazing→fabulous

帮助：aid→assistance

许多：plenty of→a lot of

2.句式拓展 

简单句变复合句

原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.

拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.

Writing 2

【2022年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；

2．交流时间和其他相关事项。

注意：1．词数100左右；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

_________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【范文】Dear Jim,

How's everything?

I'm writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?

The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you'll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流

Writing 3

【2022年浙江1月】假定你是李华， 在“中国-爱尔兰文化节” 活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友 Chris， 现在他已回国， 请你给他 写

一封邮件， 内容包括：

1. 回忆活动经历； 2. 分享个人收获； 3. 希望保持联系。

注意：

1 . 词数 80 左右；

2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。

答案：

Dear Chris,

How are you doing these days? It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.

I hope we can keep in touch often.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。

【详解】1.词汇积累

返回：come back to → return to

思念：miss→ yearn

分享：share → exchange

玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun

开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content

过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.

拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.

Writing 4

【2022年浙江卷6月】假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：

1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【范文】

Dear Michael,

Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.

Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It's really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it?

Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

由……组成：consist of→ be made up of

位于：be located on→ be situated on

与……相连接： be linked to →be connected to

预定：reserve→book

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.

拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open

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