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中考英语书面表达高分模版:申请信

时间:2024年11月11日 阅读量 : 789

1、体裁解读


申请信是在求职或留学时常用的一种信件。申请信应该简洁明了,如实地反映你的才能、成绩、愿望和目标。一封英文申请信必须表明写信的目的,原因以及对自身情况的介绍。申请信的语气要诚挚、友好,在表达自己的愿望时应礼貌而自信。


2、写作攻略


申请信要求一事一议,内容单纯。其内容一般包括:申请的具体内容;自己的情况和条件;提出要求,如请求回信、面试等。申请信的书写可以遵照以下步骤:

第一步:点名写信目的,说明信息来源,并陈述自己能胜任;

第二步:介绍自己,具体说明能胜任的原因;

第三步:表达期望,请求尽快答复并给予机会。


【写作模板】


Dear __________,

I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of _________ (工作、职位等). / I write to express my interest in __________ (工作、职位等). / In reply to your advertisement in __________ (地点),I write the letter.

My name is _________. One of my reasons for applying is that _________ (原因一). The other reason is that __________ (原因二). Besides, ___________ (原因三).

I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.

Best regards for your health and success.

Sincerely yours,

________


【亮点词汇搭配】


1. 表示优点和能力

imagination n. 想象力

honest adj. 诚实的

strength n. 长处,优点

interesting adj. 有趣的

be good at 擅长

major in ... 主修……

suitable adj. 适合的

hard-working adj. 勤奋的,努力的

have a good command of 掌握,精通


2. 表示期望

answer n. & v. 回应,答复

consider v. 考虑

offer v. 提供

opportunity n. 机会

chance n. 机会

join v. 加入

look forward to 期待

application n. 申请


3. 其他

advertisement n. 广告

possibility n. 可能性

especially adv. 尤其

interview n. 面试

reply n. & v. 回复,回应

convenience n. 方便

poster n. 海报

interest n. 兴趣

activity n. 活动

favorite adj. 最喜爱的

post/position n. 职位

volunteer n. 志愿者

in one's spare time 在某人业余时间



【经典句子背诵】


开头句  

1. I write to express my interest in ...

我写信是为了表达我对……的兴趣。

2. In reply to your advertisement in ..., I write the letter.

我写这封信是为了回应您在……广告。

3. I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of ...

我写这封信是想询问一下能否……


中间句  

1. I learned from the newspaper that your company needed a part-time English secretary.

我从报纸上看到您的公司需要一名兼职英语秘书。

2. I have a good command of ...

我……掌握得很好。

3. In my spare time, I read a lot.

我在闲暇时经常读书。

4. Being good at with children, I can do my best to help the kids.

我非常擅长和孩子一起玩,我会尽我最大的努力帮助他们。

5. In my opinion, volunteer work is great because it can help many people.

我认为志愿者的工作很伟大,因为它可以帮助很多人。

6. I think the job can not only help me improve my English, but also help me know more about the society.

我认为这份工作不仅能帮我提高英语水平,而且能帮助我更好地了解社会。


结尾句  

1. I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.

希望您能考虑我的申请。

2. I shall be much grateful if you will offer me an opportunity to an interview.

如果您能给我提供一个面试机会,我将不胜感激。

3. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

感谢您考虑我的申请,期待得到您的回复。

4. I hope you'll let me join your volunteer group.

我希望您能准许我加入您的志愿者团队。

5. I'm looking forward to your reply. 期待您的回复。



【典例赏析】


(2022四川遂宁中考真题)


向世界传递中国文化,让世界聆听中国声音。近期,我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华,你想参加此次活动,请根据下面的提示信息,向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封80词左右的自荐信。


要点提示:

1. 个人信息:姓名、年龄、班级、性格等;

2. 个人优势:

1) 读了很多关于中国历史的书,了解中国历史;

2) 知道很多历史故事,并且擅长用英语讲述它们;

3)  ……

3. 个人感想:

1) 可以培养英语学习兴趣,提高口语表达能力;

2) 让更多的人了解中国历史和文化,并为之感到自豪。

注意:

1. 文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

2. 文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯。

3. 不可逐词翻译,可适当发挥。

4. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。


【答案】例文


Dear Mr Yang,

I’ m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.

It’s my great honor to introduce myself. I’m a boy from Class One, Grade Eight. My name is Li Hua and I’m 14 years old. I’m an outgoing boy. I have many hobbies, especially reading. I have read lots of classics on Chinese history so I’m familiar with Chinese history and culture. And I know plenty of traditional folk stories, like How Yi Shoots the Suns, Yu Gong Moves a Mountain and so on. I can even tell them in English. And I can get a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the look of joy on their faces while my classmates are listening to me.

In a word, this activity is meaningful. We can not only create an interest of learning English but also improve our spoken English through the activity. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about our history and culture! I’m proud of it! Only in this way can I make it!

I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua


【详解】

1. 题干解读:本文主要是写一封自荐信,根据题干中的提示内容进行写作,可适当增加细节。

2. 写作指导:本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出;第二段主要介绍自己的个人信息和个人优势;第三段讲述自己的个人感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。


(2020湖南益阳中考真题)


益阳市正在为创建全国文明城市(national civilized city)招募志愿者。假设你是李华。想成为一名志愿者,请你用英文给志愿者协会写一封邮件,谈谈你能做的志愿者工作。

内容包括:

打扫城市公园;到老人之家帮忙:分发传单、张贴通知……


要求:

1. 词数60-80,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 内容可适当发挥,使行文连贯;

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。

参考词汇:volunteer   clean up   wash   hand out   put up


【答案】例文

Dear madam,

My name is Li Hua. I am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself.

I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices. I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua


【详解】

1. 题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。文中描述自己想申请成为一名志愿者,并介绍自己能做的事情。

2. 例文点评:本文采用的是第一人称,时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,句子通顺。

3. 高分亮点:

短语:want to do sth 想要做某事;for example 例如;clean up 打扫;be good at doing sth 擅长做某事;hand out 分发;put up 张贴

句子:I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good句中because引导原因状语从句;I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful句中由that引导的宾语从句,引导词that已省略。


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