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When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.

So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.

I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice.

What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.

When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care.

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A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.

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I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.

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A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. It was exhilarated to learn that I had gained the first prize and an award ceremony would be held in three days. Stunned by the news, I was choked with emotion while my classmates were raising their hands in triumph. Finally came the big day! When my name was announced, I mounted the stage against wild cheers and thunderous applause.With prize cup in one hand and award certificate in the other hand, I threw my eyes at my teacher,who gave me a thumbs up, with his eyes twinkling with pleasure and pride. It was at that moment that I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher.

I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.There was nobody inside. I slipped in and gingerly set the prize cup on my teacher’s desk with a note attached, saying, “It’s a glory for both of us!Your inspiration seems a beacon guiding my way ahead.”My enthusiasm about writing led me to choosing literature as my major in university and accordingly, being a writer became my career after graduation. So far, my published stories have won the hearts of numerous readers both at domestic and abroad, bringing me a sense of fulfillment and happiness,which I attributed to my teacher’s recognition and guidance.

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   A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. “You won the first prize in the writing contest,” one of my classmates rushed to my desk. Instantly, the whole class boiled up, some cheering “congratulations” while some crying “unbelievable”. I was stuck dumb. How could it be? After all, I was not good at English, let alone English writing. I bet the classmate played a trick on me until he took me to the campus noticeboard, where I saw the winner list. My name was there. But anyway, I still found it hard to believe until I attended the award presentation and got my certificate.

I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. “Thank you very much!” I showed my certificate to him with my eyes watering, “Without you, I couldn’t have done it.” Patting my shoulder, he smiled, “It is your efforts that count most. ”From then on, I began to bury myself in English as well as English writing. Just as what my teacher said, I did it well and I won another several competitions. No more words could convey my gratitude to him. It was he who made me realize nothing is impossible to a willing heart.

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  A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, the news came. "You've done a good job!You took first place!"I was frozen at the spot,feeling incredible and overjoyed.The thunderous applause and hearty blessings from my fellow students confirmed what I heard to be true.Next morning, I was fortunate enough to be invited to a simple but impressive award presentation ceremony. When the schoolmaster presented the certificate to me,my whole body was trembling and my eyes twinkled with pleasure.My dedication paid off.

I went to the teacher's office after the award presentation. "Congratulations!" my teacher greeted me with a firm handshake. " "Millions of thanks, Sir!" I hugged him tightly. To tell the truth, I felt inferior since I had been so weak in English and writing. I almost gave up on myself. However, the writing competition changed my world. And it was my teacher who was considerate enough to encourage me to attend it, urging me to take advantage of my potential in telling stories. My teacher gave roses with everlasting fragrance in his hands!

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Paragraph 1: A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I was told to attend the award presentation for the writing contest, my jaw dropping in astonishment. "Writing has always been so difficult and painful for me, yet I got an award for writing like this?" I murmured, my eyes challenging. At the ceremony, the host announced that I had won the Best Narrative Award. I held the trophy, excitement choked my words.

Paragraph 2: I went to my teacher’ office after the award presentation. "It's incredible! I made it!" I exclaimed, pleased beyond description. Looking at the trophy, my teacher seemed not surprised, a small smile curling at the corner of his mouth, "My boy, it is your commitment and perseverance that eventually paid off!" Since then, my teacher's encouraging words, just like a lighthouse in the mist, would always be lighting in the sky of my life.

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A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. The moment I saw my name on the top of the first prize list, surprise and joy occupied my mind. Despite the obstacle and confusion on the road, the horse eventually reached his destination with determination. I was invited to deliver a speech on the award presentation. I explained why I chose this special subject and even acted out one-role play as Revere’s horse on the stage, which made the audience laugh out. In the end, I showed my gratitude to the horse rider---my social studies teacher.

I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. Bathed in the enjoyment, he waved at me and expressed his congratulations. With tears almost blurring my vision, I gave him a big hug. Without his encouragement, I couldn’t have won the prize. It was him that carved my writing path.Golden sunlight scattered through the office window, spreading he brightness and warmth. He patted my back and laughed out again. Then he pointed that my passion, devotion and persistence contributed to my success. “Just like the horse you wrote, he got tired and had doubts, but he kept going.”

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When I almost forgot the contest, the news came. It was a phone ｃａｌｌ saying that I am a winner. When I knew I won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of me. I rushed to my mother with excitement and shared the fantastic news with her. On hearing of the unexpected news, she was so surprised that she froze with her mouth wide open. After a while, excited tears streamed down her cheeks. After that, bathed in the warm sunshine, we made our way to the award presentation. On the way my mother remind me that without your teacher's encouragement you wouldn’t have made much progress in writing in English.

I went to the teacher’s office after the award presentation.With tears in my eyes I said to him, ”I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your timely help. It was your encouragement that made me brave enough to sign up for the competition.”He stepped forward, patted me on the shoulder, and said softly, ”where there is a will, there is a way.” We hugged each other as tightly as possible and our eyes were filled with tears. Only then did I realize that it was bravery and determination that can conquer all the difficulties. Hard work paid off eventually.

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A few weeks later, I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.A wave of astonishment swept over me.I won the first prize.Recalling the past struggling  days, I deeply sensed that it was my teacher's encouragement, my family's support,and my wholehearted commitment that made it all worthwhile.The award presentation came as scheduled.I delivered my short speech with aflame mood ,like in my heart. My classmates stared at me with delight. Everything went smoothly and I was surrounded by flowers and applause.However, the person with whom I desired to share my joy was my teacher.

 I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. “Thank you very much. My dear teacher.”I said in a gentle voice，lowering my head to catch my teacher's attention. Noticing me，he turned around，“Congratulations!You did a good job. Where there is a will，there is a way.You are supposed to believe in yourself.”I nodded ，full of gratitude.My teacher patted my back，sitting there as bright as a ray of sunshine.In the following days，I tried my best to work hard everyday.From then on， not only did I have a good command of writing，but I also knew the truth——fear never builds the future, but hope does.

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When I almost forgot the contest, the news came.I won the third place in the contest while my deskmate Kate ranked the first.The good news made me happy and shocked. Never did I think I could win the reward, even I almost forgot the contest. I replayed the writing experience in my mind. The process of creating the entry was filled with hardship and annoyance , but it deserved my unremitting effort. The jury issued a certificate to prove my efforts.

 I went to the teacher’s office after the award presentation. The teacher walked towards me excitedly and gave me a big hug ,saying “ congratulations, boy and have a seat.” I sat next to him shyly. “Don't be nervous,my boy. now tell me your feelings about it.” I firstly expressed my gratitude to my loved teacher and said “ What you said gave me a great deal of encouragement, which inspired my motivation to writing. I wouldn't had won the place without your help.” “My boy, remember ,you should thank yourself . After all, hard work always pays off. ” I benefit a lot from my loved teacher. His painstaking care and encouragement will influence my lifetime.

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When I almost forgot the contest, the news came.A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.When my teacher walked into the classroom, a shining bright smile was on his face. He just had announced I won the first place in the writing competition when everyone surprised in disbelief firstly but then gave me thunderous applause. Hearing the announcement,I also cannot believe my ears. I didn’t intend to won the prize but to enjoy the pleasure of writing. Then my teacher told me to take the award, which was a big prize for me. So moved and happy was I to hear the news that I gave my teacher a tight hug. When the award presentation finished, I felt a mixture of feelings. I want to say something with my teacher.

  I went to my teacher’s office after the presentation. When walking near my teacher, he also found me with a big smile on his face. “congratulations, you did a good job in the writing contest”. With these encouraging words, I said with a whole grateful heart. “ Thank you very much for encouraging me to join the contest, without your help and direction, I couldn’t have achieved such great progress, now I found I have been into writing,not only the writing itself but the process does count. I will never give up and live up to your wish ”. Hearing my words, the teacher also felt a great belief, he said he loved my stories and believed I will be more successful in the future. Heartfelt thanks should be given to your teacher who gives you life direction and principles.

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   When I almost forgot the contest, the news came.I received a phone ｃａｌｌ, and it was from the organization that said I had won the grand prize. As soon as I heard the news, I quickly shared this unbelievable news with my mother. She hugged me tightly, tears filling her eyes. Then my mother accompanied me to receive the award, reminding me that it was because of my teacher's help that I had become who I am today. I should also share this joy with my teacher.

  I went to my teacher’s office after the presentation."I am so happy for you," my teacher said, nodding and looking at me. Pride and tears filled his eyes. He continued, "I knew you could do it. You deserve this recognition, and it's just the beginning. You should keep going." I replied, "Without your help, I wouldn't have achieved what I have today. Your support and guidance have had a tremendous impact on me." After that , his words have echoed in my ears for many years,and every time I start writing, I will think of my teacher. He taught me how to believe in myself and guided me towards a bright future.

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A few weeks later, I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. To everyone's surprise, I, an immigrant, won the first place in the writing contest. Hearing the good news, I felt a sense of joy surging through me. I leapt into the air and shouted out loud, "I made it!".During the award presentation ceremony, I was invited to deliver a speech. Patiently and confidently, I told the audience how I once didn't love writing and now enjoyed writing and how I realized the value of perseverance with the help of my teacher.

 I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. With the trophy in hand, I entered the office. My teacher rose from the seat and came up to me. "Congratulations!" he said, slapping me on the back. He grinned from ear to ear as I showed him the trophy. "I owe my success to you. "I said sincerely, "Without your encouragement and belief, I wouldn't have succeeded." He laughed, his eyes shining with excitement. "I knew you had it in you. I'm proud of you for not giving up." Whenever looking back on this incident, I feel extremely grateful to him. It was my social studies teacher who encouraged me to realize my potential and thus changed my trajectory of my life.

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